Posted Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:48 pm GMT by ComedyBee
I have a few hands that i would like critiqued by you guys, they are trivial really, but i'm interested in your opinions none-the-less. I few of these are hands where i won, but i want to make sure it wasnt a badly played win.
HAND #1:
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PokerStars Game #5505814038: Hold'em Limit ($0.10/$0.20) - 2006/07/09 - 17:40:23 (ET)
Table 'Gyas III' 10-max Seat #7 is the button
Seat 1: Atecgal ($7.85 in chips)
Seat 3: idummy ($3.10 in chips)
Seat 4: stix=chips ($1.15 in chips)
Seat 6: steiner24 ($0.55 in chips)
Seat 7: hrockvegas ($3.75 in chips)
Seat 9: Dr_Longthing ($1.75 in chips)
Seat 10: CrustyFace ($4.85 in chips)
bassboat250 will be allowed to play after the button
Dr_Longthing: posts small blind $0.05
CrustyFace: posts big blind $0.10
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to CrustyFace [6h 2h]
Atecgal: calls $0.10
idummy: folds
stix=chips: folds
steiner24: calls $0.10
hrockvegas: calls $0.10
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.05
CrustyFace: checks
*** FLOP *** [3c Th 8h]
Dr_Longthing: checks
CrustyFace: bets $0.10
Atecgal: calls $0.10
steiner24: raises $0.10 to $0.20
hrockvegas: folds
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.20
CrustyFace: calls $0.10
Atecgal: calls $0.10
*** TURN *** [3c Th 8h] [Kh]
Dr_Longthing: checks
CrustyFace: bets $0.20
Atecgal: folds
steiner24: raises $0.05 to $0.25 and is all-in
Dr_Longthing: folds
CrustyFace: calls $0.05
*** RIVER *** [3c Th 8h Kh] [5h]
*** SHOW DOWN ***
CrustyFace: shows [6h 2h] (a flush, King high)
steiner24: mucks hand
CrustyFace collected $1.75 from pot
steiner24 said, "lol"
steiner24 said, "wow"
*** SUMMARY ***
Total pot $1.80 | Rake $0.05
Board [3c Th 8h Kh 5h]
Seat 1: Atecgal folded on the Turn
Seat 3: idummy folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 4: stix=chips folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 6: steiner24 mucked [4h 8d]
Seat 7: hrockvegas (button) folded on the Flop
Seat 9: Dr_Longthing (small blind) folded on the Turn
Seat 10: CrustyFace (big blind) showed [6h 2h] and won ($1.75) with a flush, King high
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HAND #2
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PokerStars Game #5505925913: Hold'em Limit ($0.10/$0.20) - 2006/07/09 - 17:51:48 (ET)
Table 'Gyas III' 10-max Seat #8 is the button
Seat 3: idummy ($4.90 in chips)
Seat 4: BorisBrodski ($4.90 in chips)
Seat 5: kekova04 ($1.90 in chips)
Seat 6: SLIM..32 ($2.90 in chips)
Seat 7: hrockvegas ($3.60 in chips)
Seat 8: bassboat250 ($3.05 in chips)
Seat 9: Dr_Longthing ($4.25 in chips)
Seat 10: CrustyFace ($6 in chips)
Dr_Longthing: posts small blind $0.05
CrustyFace: posts big blind $0.10
dpgp: sits out
JohnFu111: sits out
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to CrustyFace [Ks Qs]
idummy: folds
BorisBrodski: folds
kekova04: folds
SLIM..32: calls $0.10
hrockvegas: folds
bassboat250: folds
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.05
hrockvegas leaves the table
CrustyFace: raises $0.10 to $0.20
SLIM..32: calls $0.10
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.10
*** FLOP *** [Kd 4d Ts]
dasgelb joins the table at seat #7
Dr_Longthing: bets $0.10
CrustyFace: raises $0.10 to $0.20
SLIM..32: folds
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.10
*** TURN *** [Kd 4d Ts] [3d]
Dr_Longthing: checks
CrustyFace: bets $0.20
Dr_Longthing: calls $0.20
*** RIVER *** [Kd 4d Ts 3d] [3h]
Dr_Longthing: checks
CrustyFace: bets $0.20
Dr_Longthing: folds
CrustyFace collected $1.35 from pot
CrustyFace: doesn't show hand
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HAND #3
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PokerStars Game #5506403835: Hold'em Limit ($0.10/$0.20) - 2006/07/09 - 18:36:54 (ET)
Table 'Klonios' 10-max Seat #1 is the button
Seat 1: BigH29 ($1.15 in chips)
Seat 2: MisterDS ($15.90 in chips)
Seat 3: taurusspirit ($3 in chips)
Seat 4: dropps ($5.70 in chips)
Seat 5: CrustyFace ($4.90 in chips)
Seat 6: Surfacing325 ($4 in chips)
Seat 7: beggy ($1.85 in chips)
Seat 8: dasgelb ($4.15 in chips)
Seat 9: schafsheep ($4.50 in chips)
Seat 10: zz@vyx ($10.60 in chips)
MisterDS: posts small blind $0.05
taurusspirit: posts big blind $0.10
Surfacing325: posts big blind $0.10
*** HOLE CARDS ***
Dealt to CrustyFace [As Qh]
dropps: folds
CrustyFace: raises $0.10 to $0.20
Surfacing325: calls $0.10
beggy: calls $0.20
dasgelb: folds
schafsheep: folds
zz@vyx: folds
BigH29: folds
MisterDS: calls $0.15
taurusspirit: calls $0.10
*** FLOP *** [3d 5s 7c]
MisterDS: bets $0.10
taurusspirit: calls $0.10
CrustyFace: folds
Surfacing325: folds
beggy: calls $0.10
*** TURN *** [3d 5s 7c] [3s]
MisterDS: bets $0.20
taurusspirit: folds
beggy: calls $0.20
*** RIVER *** [3d 5s 7c 3s] [8d]
MisterDS: bets $0.20
beggy: calls $0.20
*** SHOW DOWN ***
MisterDS: shows [9s 9d] (two pair, Nines and Threes)
beggy: shows [Jc Jd] (two pair, Jacks and Threes)
beggy collected $2 from pot
*** SUMMARY ***
Total pot $2.10 | Rake $0.10
Board [3d 5s 7c 3s 8d]
Seat 1: BigH29 (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 2: MisterDS (small blind) showed [9s 9d] and lost with two pair, Nines and Threes
Seat 3: taurusspirit (big blind) folded on the Turn
Seat 4: dropps folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 5: CrustyFace folded on the Flop
Seat 6: Surfacing325 folded on the Flop
Seat 7: beggy showed [Jc Jd] and won ($2) with two pair, Jacks and Threes
Seat 8: dasgelb folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 9: schafsheep folded before Flop (didn't bet)
Seat 10: zz@vyx folded before Flop (didn't bet)
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I would appreciate any feedback, thanks in advance:
Dave
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Posted Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:42 pm GMT by crack
hand 1:
I would have raised again on the flop and got some more money in there. There are a few players so it's a good chance to make more whena flush hits, if you have the winning hand that is.
hand 2:
fine
hand 3:
I probably would have peeled a turn card here
Posted Mon Jul 10, 2006 12:54 am GMT by TxShadow
Hand 1: Not bad, possibly could raise here on the flop. However, I don't think you're getting anyone to fold a better hand by betting and if your flush doesn't come in, you've made it pretty pricey for yourself. Also, your flush draw is pretty week, so getting your flush doesn't even secure the pot.
Hand 2: Fine
Hand 3: I would probably have seen the turn. You could very well still have the best hand, and if you get an A or Q at this point, you're taking it down a lot of the time.
Posted Mon Jul 10, 2006 6:30 am GMT by UrAteUp
Hand 1: Nicely played. Watch those low end flushes though. They aren't always the best hand.
Hand 2: Played well.
Hand 3: Raise more pre-flop with hands like AX. A min raise will not get many people out of the pot. You would rather play AX hands against a limited number of players. Make it a 4-5xBB raise pre-flop and knock a few players out of this hand pre-flop.
Posted Mon Jul 10, 2006 7:49 am GMT by ComedyBee
I would have raised more if this was no-limit, but this is limit.
I have decided to revert back to Limit because i am still a bit temperamental at NL which, as you know, can cost alot more than limit. So im back here at limit to improve my patience.
Dave
Posted Mon Jul 10, 2006 8:15 am GMT by ScanX
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Hand 3: Raise more pre-flop with hands like AX. |
rofl
funniest is that he prolly believes that all 3 hands are NL and likes the way they were played...when it would have actually been bad/horrible to play them like that at NL :>
Posted Mon Jul 10, 2006 9:53 am GMT by UrAteUp
Oh mannnnn...welcome to freakin Monday....  . Jeeeeez...not sure how I missed this was FL and not NL.
Dayum...I would have been better off staying in bed today...
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